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always by your side

the words that i wanted to say when u broke my heart
i just wanted to be safe in your arms
when we were together our heart beat was one
but u made a choice that had to be made
even through i had nothing to say
the memories is all i have left  with
and tears i cry ed
i hope in your heart that us broking up is mistake that u find
ill be here when u realize right by your side

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Written March 21st, 2005

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  • CountryCousin
    March 21, 2005
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    Well done.

    Okay and we all do say this and yes if we have been left behind or kicked to the curb by a lover, boyfriend etc. Then we understand this write. Well done.