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forever amor

i miss the way you smile
or the way kiss me on my head
the memories suddenly are dead
you just wanted to be friend
i wanted to move to get over u
but my thoughts just lead to you
i know i need to move on but i love u so much
i just wish had the warmth of your touch
i don't want to wait to be together
i want your geeky smile and wish to be funny jokes
i don't want to be alone please come back soon
if don't i don't know what to do

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Written March 21st, 2005

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    September 29, 2005
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    Such a helpless feeling when love is unrequited. It happens and we grow and learn. Excellent show of very real emotion.~Pam