Hail to you, Pippin.
Ruler of the feline world.
King of your domain,
you hold the world in your paws.
Your fur burns, orange,
like a sun that shall never set.
The white of your belly,
glowing white, like snow on a mountain.
Your golden eyes gaze the world,
like the moon blazing high.
Eyes like gold, grand like the riches of Eygpt.
Your eyes like a hynotic charm.
Beware those who pet you wrong.
Whoever darkens your path,
may they beware your feline might.
Like daggers, your claws find flesh.
When pleased by your loyal subjects,
you erupt like thunder, purring.
Such a sympohney pours from you,
like the song of a Siren, enchanting.
When I return, such a greeting you being.
Your mew like a silver bell.
It's sound travels throughout known time.
Your voice inlike any other.
Hail to you Pippin!
Hail to the distroyer of furnature!
Hail to the king of the litter box!
Hail to the boastful hunter!
Hail to you my cat...
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Written March 21st, 2005
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A contest entry
- Sisterhood of Cats Group Contest by Violet Moodswing.
500 points, ended March 27, 2006, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I got you added back to the group. Welcome back and again thanks for enterring.
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Very nicely done. In your last stanza --furnature-- should be furniture. Other than that it is very good. Nice pictures that we can grab hold of and just a wonderful story of a furry friend.
The only thing that is not in your favor is that this is a group contest for the Sisterhood of Cats, but you may have intended to send an application for the group? If it was your intention to join the group then apply again. Occasionally a site glitch will keep an application from showing up. I won't DQ your entry, but I can only consider it for trophy if you are a group member. I will be doing final judging on Sunday because I want everyone to have time to make corrections, etc. So if you do want to join the group, apply as soon as possible at the link at the top of the contest write up.
Thanks for enterring. I am glad I got a chance to read the poem. It gave me a smile
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Hey thanks for reading! Glad you got a good laugh at it.
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At first I seriously thought I would not laugh, or at least, chucke to this poem's content, but I was wrong, when I started reading "hail to the destroyer of furniture" and so on I chuckled.
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Thanks! I'll work on it! Yes, I do tend to smother myself sometimes. Thankz again!
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Fix your grammar, diction and spelling. Then, rethink your structure, I think you are smothering yourself.
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Thank you very much! *smiles*
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It's so cute! heh, a few spelling errors here and there, but eh, it's got good images and descriptive words in it, good job, I liked it.
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Thanks. and the best of luck to you.
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interesting..very good i like it...good luck
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I love my cat. He's like my best bud at the end of the day when everyone else is gone and I am left alone with all the crap people gave me during the day. He's always there to brighten my day.
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lol, ohh that is so cute I love it. I'm not a cat person, cuase I'm allergic, but I have a georgous dog that I love, so I get it. That's so cool to write to write a poem for your cat.
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