Secret damnation from earthly delights,
a beaten battered genius.
A bash to the back of the head,
blood soaked concrete.
A suck in the bathroom,
a fuck in the car,
below a bridge in an out of way place.
Love on the sofa,
hate in their eyes,
despising what they've both become.
A shot in the mouth,
from a bullet clean and pure.
The demon watches from a place beyond,
and cackles at the betrayal of God,
and denial of heavenly bliss.
A hated death,
a hated life,
bliss forever squandered.
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Written March 21st, 2005
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great write! this is an amazing piece and you should be proud of your skill. continue writing...
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------The demon watches from a place beyond,
and cackles at the betrayal of God,------oh i've been there a thousand times.... more enjoyable than being on my knees in a church pew, god patting me on the head with a celestial, "good girl" ..ugh
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