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Crumbs of Music..

Vibrations of music
Rings in my ears
Felt with such soothing
Bring me too tears

Echos's of tunes
Shared for so many years
Travel through time
From ear to ear

Sensations of relaxation
Running through my soul
Plucking each string
As I grow old

Young is my heart
With each tune I do hear
Feelings of hugs
Music so dear

Close your eyes to feel
Each tune as it comes
Let your body go limp
Feel every last crumb

Become the tune
Lay down to feel
Music everywhere
Makes life so real...

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Written October 17th, 2002

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  • Dark Whispers
    September 25, 2007

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    Close your eyes to feel
    Each tune as it comes
    Let your body go limp
    Feel every last crumb

    Become the tune
    Lay down to feel
    Music everywhere
    Makes life so real...

    great ending love the poem

    • pruedence
      September 25, 2007
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      Thank you for such a nice comment on my poem for your contest. I do love music as you can see in my writing. Thanks again, glad you enjoyed it