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Crazy Takes Over

The sight of dishes piled in the sink
Drive me completely over the brink
My mind clouds over
Crazy takes over

I take the time to explain
And you fail to retain
My mind clouds over
Crazy takes over

I spend my time counting for hours
Uneven happens and everyone cowers
My mind clouds over
Crazy takes over

You argue with me and my opinions
My eyes water like onions
My mind clouds over
Crazy takes over

A golden job presents itself
I go for it and fuck myself
My mind clouds over
Crazy takes over

I ponder my mistakes
And my world quakes
My mind clouds over
Crazy takes over

I see her and want to murder
I cry out and know I can never hurt her
My mind clouds over
Crazy takes over

Memories blur and become one huge tumor
I collapse from sadness and total fear
My mind clouds over
Crazy takes over

A rainbow appears just out of reach
A droplet of rain hits and things are so bleak
My mind clouds over
Crazy takes over

I look at my reflection in the darkened window
They watch me and seem to know
My mind clouds over
Crazy takes over

Crazy takes over
My mind clouds over
All hope seems lost
Normalcy is a ghost

Author notes

I'm a dude, shes a dude, we're all dudes

Okay I read the rules
Written March 21st, 2005

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