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Filling this emptyness

The emptness has began to take over
And I can't bare the pain much longer
Something has to be done.
I must become non invisable...
I can't take it!
Why do I feel this way?!
Filling this emptyness...
Not going to be easy

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Written March 20th, 2005

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  • Misterpoet
    March 28, 2005
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    Life

    I feel the same way... everyday with the same questions... this poem is totally me! I loved the read and the imagery... vividly brilliant! Nice poem...