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"Time To Break"

"Time To Break"

Time to break,
and take a short rest...
To escape from my world,
of chaos and stress...

To take a little trip,
to just get away...
To drove into sunshine,
to leave all this grey

Time to regroup,
to be all alone...
In my car, with my music,
letting my mind, just roam...

Maybe this is my way,
of just relieving stress...
When my mind decides,
it's time for a rest...

Is it just me who,
feels the need to escape...
Who's mind insists that it's
time to break...

Do I have a serious problem,
when I loose, my concentration...
When my mind drifts off,
and I can't follow a conversaion...

So when my mind, wont't focus,
and I know it's time to break,
I try to pay attention,
and then, This time I take...

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Written March 20th, 2005

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  • rksweetpunk
    March 29, 2005
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    good

    this could be a song...i can almost hear a melody, i like it