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Truth

Truth

Am I a Pilgrim?
A lost wanderer searching
Hidden words, symbols
Illuminated in truth’s
Meanderings of ink blood.

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A tanka!
Written March 20th, 2005

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  • jantastic gold member
    March 31, 2005
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    A succinct write that could mean much to many. Nicely done. I'll just enjoy and take my own meaning from it.


  • Simply-Complex
    March 24, 2005
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    Very cool, awesome pic too, it fits. I like your styel, mine always turn out longer than that. lol. -thumbs up-


  • Emmerson
    March 22, 2005
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    Brilliant

    This is very cool Razor, I like it very very much . The pic is fantastic also.


  • FaithInWords
    March 20, 2005
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    It was very short and brief, but you said a lot in it. Great htings come in small packages, this is evidence of that. Great job!


  • March 20, 2005
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    Hey I liked this alot! Not bad at all!

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