The car engine is running;
the guns are loaded.
Police fleeting in and out;
all around this town.
Leave the car at the station,
Board the next train.
Gangland wannabes in pursuit,
Dieing for their cause.
Throw the owner out,
as I steal another car.
Good Samaritans, I shoot them all.
I have to get away.
Turning left and right,
No cares for safety.
Pedestrians mean more points,
Shoot and run them down.
Police at the next corner;
another roadblock to crumble.
What's happening - why's it flashing?
Don't you just hate it when the game freezes?
© ali-p
Author notes
in twenty minutes this was flung together for this contest and *probably/does needs loads to get it sorted ....
(*delete where appropriate)
so on that note .... be gentle with me!!!
Written March 20th, 2005
A contest entry
- Gamers by PhoenixS-Dragon.
350 points, ended May 3, 2005, 6 entries
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This was great and I know my husband would have liked it he loves computer games. This brought a smile to my face as well.
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lol...my teenage brother has this game and I have forbid him to even play it in veiw of any of my kids. He is adicted to the game! I was repulsed when I saw that the guy could kill whomever he pleased for no reason... drive pretty much wherever he pleased with a stolen vehicle... Hell, there is even sex on the game
I don't know what the world is coming to when such things have become entertainment! What I would find dun and entertaining is to have the developers and manufacturers of these games being hunted and shot down, raped, beaten, run over maimed and mutilated etc... Now that would be entertainment worth watching!
All and all, it looks like you have the game down...lol... and since you are old enough to know that it isn't really cool to do those things that makes your write fine. It is that this game is in the hands of children as young as 10 years old! Now that is a crime in itself!
Good luck with your poem and best wishes.... ~genielassie~ -
not bad not bad at all
yeah doesn't it suck when it your game freezes n e ways good poem and acurate discription of the game -
I think this is pretty cool, good luck in the contest. You did a great job on this.
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this poem was great. the ending realy brought a smile to my face as i can relate to you about the freezing.
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