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Drought

Drought

One tear holding fast
Gilded by your moistened lips
Brushed with a finger
Placed on my awaiting mouth
Tasted by my hopes and dreams

Author notes

This poem is a Tanka. I hope you enjoy it!
Written March 20th, 2005

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  • jantastic gold member
    March 31, 2005
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    Another well-penned musing from you.
    I won't leave a rambling comment. I like it a lot.


  • jxtxdx
    March 20, 2005
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    Absolute

    wow i loved this such a great poem , i thought the last line was fantatstic great great write way to go