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Beauty You Cannot Have

What is B E A U T Y?

Is it the clothes?
The make-up?
The hair?
The eyes?
Or is something more?
Something unseen to the eye?
Yet clear to the mind?

Yes

There is something more to beauty
Than the look of the person

Look
Listen
Gaze into my eyes
My bright blue eyes
Look deep
Look long
Peer into my soul
There's more than just blue in my eyes
There's more than just physical beauty to me
I have a great
Fabulous
Gorgeous personality
You just have to look
Just have to see
There's much more to beauty
Than what your eyes do see
It's a shame you cannot see that
So now I say to you
Goodbye

Author notes

I don't like guys that try to get with me only for my looks. I want them to see the insides of me too. I have a great personality.. I just want someone that sees that.

-Kayla
Written March 4th, 2005

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  • sadgurl1
    March 30, 2005
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    awesome job and i completely beleive in this whole heartly. keep it up.

    Jessica


  • miss groupie.
    March 23, 2005
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    Kayla, I really like this one! I'm glad that someone else feels that it isn't the looks, but it's the true inner beauty! Well, see ya later!!
    Love ya!!
    Linds


  • Azazel
    March 21, 2005
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    Beauty is a blonde in a bikini sitting on top of a mountain of twinkies all for me!


  • rachelle1753
    March 20, 2005
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    good

    this is very true..i agree with it a lot
    much <3


  • Miss Belligerence
    March 20, 2005
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    this is great. I say beauty is a state of mind b/c if you think you're ugly then you will carry yourself and act in a way that shows that. Great write, excellent
    I'm also sort of tired of guys simply wanting to check me out/feel me up instead of talk to me...
    -Gibson

  • DarkDesire
    March 20, 2005
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    Aww, that is a really good poem. Yeah, it would be next if people could see what is on the inside, not the outside, but a lot of people just can't do that. Great job!

    Nikole

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