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Make up my mind

"I hate today,
I hate tomarrow.

I hate my dress,
I hate my shoes.

I hate her,
I hate him.

I hate this,
I hate that."

I shouldn't be hating when all I'm ment to do is love.
I shouldn't be hating if I'm told I'm loved.
I shouldn't be hating when I'm so fortunate.
So once more what I meant to say was this:

"I love today,
I love tomarrow.

I love my dress,
I love my shoes.

I love her,
I love him.

I love this,
I love that."

I don't understand this society,
There lifestyles so blank to me.
I don't understand my lies.
There reasons makes it seem like I try.

"I love today,
I hate tomarrow.

I love my dress,
I hate my shoes.

I love her,
I hate him.

I love this,
I hate that."

Its now all so clear to me,
WHO I am is WHAT I am

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Written March 20th, 2005

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  • RyanNevermore
    August 24, 2005
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    Lol, this poem gave me a headache, I had to think...You spelled tomorrow wrong, by the by

  • pozo
    April 10, 2005
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    Good write which I liked a lot, this is so true Keep writing this was great
    All the best,
    Pozo


  • March 20, 2005
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    Very good. i don't see how you thnk mine are good.