Pain
is a feeling you will
gain.
Fire
the pyro and hend him
higher.
Choke
the victim and his breath turns to
smoke.
Crucifix
of a holy man, yet not innocent by the lord's
hand.
Holy
is the devils land, which means alot to
man.
Demons
hunt the child's soul, wanting to take it
all.
Haunted
roads of lonliness.
Hurt
stares of regard, hurts like getting stabbed by a
shard.
Dust
of the nothing-ness, no where to pick after the
mess.
Heart
of emptiness, of only one rose, a happiness is just a
pose.
Empty
is my heart as my concious seems to be, heart thats never
free.
Tear
the heart, and a scream to echo for no one
special.
No
one knows what its like to be defeated in a life by a single
strike.
Wine
of the lands of my mind, are haunting the plauge of the sands of
time.
Death
is my empty road, a road with nothing but a trail of dust, leaving to wonder about mistrust and the temptations of the devil's
lust.
Author notes
Written March 20th, 2005
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Thank you Queen Jezebel, I thank you for your compliments. It means alot to me.
-with gratitude
-Veira Ash -
this was great. i love how you put the words, it made it feel deeper.
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Devils land is holy, for most people are going there, so they should get to believe into it. I am sorry if you did not understand the meaning. It is meant to be a feeling of failure, and depression. Hend him, means raise him. If you knew that. Most people should exault the devil's land, they are going there. So that was my meaning. and I know I made some typos, everybody does make mistakes, and I am sorry I am human that way.
Thanky you for your compliments and comments.
-Veira Ash -
Thank you bloodysorrow for your compliment. It means alot to me. I try to feed people's hunger for emotion in my poems. I hope your hunger has been fed.
-Veira Ash -
LOL, alright. I am only thirteen, so I dont have bad eyesight...yet. Well, when you finally read it countrycousin, I hope you like it very much.
-Blessings
-Veira Ash -
this is so wonderful!i like the way you wrote it keep it up and i will read more of your poetry
~rachelle
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Thank you much Cerise rose. Your compliments are taken with gratitude. I try to help the reader relate to the words to create and image to go along with. I am glad you liked it.
Thanks.
-Veira Ash -
Hard to read poor eyesight.
This was interesting but hard to read and my eyesight is damaged so I will come back to it another time because it sounds so intriguing to me. -
wow this is a brilliant poem, i love your poetry style its great. i loved your descriptions in this poem, anywys well done and keep on writing xxx
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