Did you know that I was far?
Looking out for your souvenirs
That causing out this pain.
Reminiscing memories,
Flowing beneath so much clear
Driving me insane.
Set me free,
From shadows of your love.
Let me be
The one I’m dreaming of.
Chorus:
This is sad,
Sadder than we had.
The pain is bursting,
My tears are swelling
I hope you understand.
I'm so mad,
Madder than you had.
My mind is spinning,
My heart is breaking
I hope you understand.
Set me free,
From shadows of your love.
Let me be
The one I’m dreaming of.
Hush...
My baby please let go.
I know it's hard, but go.
I burned them all
The souvenirs of your love.
Chorus:
This is sad,
Sadder than we had.
The pain is bursting,
My tears are swelling
I hope you understand.
I'm so mad,
Madder than you had.
My mind is spinning,
My heart is breaking
I hope you understand.
Set me free,
From shadows of your love.
Let me be
The one I’m dreaming of.
Author notes
#7
it's sounds like an emopunk.... not loud.. simple and smooth... just like Silverstein's songs or dashboard confe..
I already played it... i just don't have a good recorder to record it.. maybe soon...
hope you like it...
Written March 20th, 2005
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very chill sounding, its somehting that would go better acoustic. Thnks for entering
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very nice. a good flow. i enjoyed reading it.
thanx for entering and good luck -
thanks for a wonderful complement!!
I'm glad you liked it!! heheh...
I'm a big fan of emo punk!
and my words from that lyrics were based from my experience!!
Thanks for spending you time reading this!!
~dycz
[havesomecoffee]
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This is beautiful. Delicate and heartbreaking, but yet so oddly soothing that it's amazing. You're right. It really does sound like something Dashboard Confessional would sing. Especially the part that goes:
"Hush...
My baby please let go.
I know it's hard, but go."
This really is great... i'm going to have to bookmark this. It really tugged at my heartstrings. I hate to be a line copier, but I just can't go without telling you how much I loved:
"This is sad,
Sadder than we had.
The pain is bursting,
My tears are swelling"
...so much emotion packed into that part. Great job.. best of luck in the contest..
Mada -
This is really neat... It flows nicely, it really sounds / feels like lyrics, which is sometimes hard to do. Awesome write and good luck in the contest
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This is really lyrical - it is so dscriptive - great job and congratulations on winning the contest.
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salamat chong... bawi nalang aku maya!! ei.. basahin mo ung "My Dream" mageenjoy ka dun!! salamat!
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Excellent! I have read a lot of lyrics in here yet this is quite far from 'em. Eto lang nagustuhan ko talaga not because you're my kababayan but I really loved this piece.
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sadness yet cooleness...
This is pretty cool looking--I can definitely see it as a song. (Sorry it took me so long to finally look at the contestants...frikkin bio class! XD) Anyways I sort of took it to mean that there was just a big argument and someone died. But I have a really weird mind so... Anyways great job and congratulations on the trophy and stuff!
*I love my Stephen sooooooo much*
~Alexandra~ -
wow... i'm a real big fan of emopunk music....
i hope to here this one.....
I loved it!
I felt how hard it is to deal with somebody you don't love anymore... -
thanks for entering and thanks for reading the rules.
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