I am falling,
Can you save me?
I must save myself,
From your hate.
You were always there
to catch my tears.
I have tried hard to
Hide my fears.
Ashes to ashes,
Dust to dust.
I have fallen so,
Save me you must.
You have always said,
“what is right?”
that way I wouldn’t
be lieing.
Why aren’t you here?
Now that I need you.
Ashes to ashes,
Dust to dust.
I have fallen so,
Save me you must.
Why have you
Forsaken me?
I will always be
Lost in your eyes.
I am falling
Drowning in you.
I love you so,
You need to see.
Ashes to ashes,
Dust to dust.
I have fallen so,
Save me you must.
I need to know
That I’m not alone.
My God Amighty
Will always be there.
He is the rain and sky
From above.
He will never hurt me,
Like you did.
Ashes to ashes,
Dust to dust.
I have fallen so,
Save me you must.
Author notes
this poem is for lots of people. God, mushy, jazz, yannick, my dad, js, alex, katie r, mars...lots of people...
Written March 20th, 2005
A contest entry
- Bible Bashing. Oh Come all ye Faithful. by ----michael----.
400 points, ended April 15, 2005, 25 entries
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ri, ri, ri . what can i say ok im not really tal;king bout teh poem but oh well, I have read almost everysingle bit of your worx, cheerup, what you need a a friend or two to lean on, people haev told me your a good person, and im shure at school ther are a couple of people who you are friends with it can't be all that bad can it?
ok well good luck, i was just advising
from sarah-moon -
lol...thx!! lol yes, i did read it in English....i have 163 points and have been writing for about a year
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bravo bravo!!! lol...... i already read it though...didnt you read it to us in english???? It's still good.....lol....... how many points do u have????????? outa curiosity.... and how long hav u been writing poetry??? I'm not writing you different messages to ya because the asshole siting next to me (ma bro) is looking over ma shoulder... And he wont let me do anything cuz he wants on...... anyway like da poem........luv ya.....watever i normally say....
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxxo luv u but u prolli luv me more!!! (thats a good thing)
~*Dark Black Rose*~ -
ok ive read this poem 10 X (2X in french class) and yea mr.schmidt got pissed at us for talkin to much rerember?
that was funny
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marsie -
LOL, that's funny, usuallly (actually always) I talk in English during Spanish Class, but even for something written during class, it is a very good poem. And once again, I liked.
muchly!! TTYL Tyler -
thank you/...i was in french class and in the front row and speaking english w/ my friend lol...the teacher...has...um...'issues'lol
thank you for the comment!!!
avec ai,
Riri
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EXCELLENTE'
Very good! I liked it muchly. Not more to say but, I applaud!
Keep up the god work!
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