To live life
for old age
and calm
in final bliss
behind all that is past
and to stay with this aim
towards which we have lived
to find beauty,
the existence of love.
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Written March 20th, 2005
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i am so very pleased with myself sometimes lol the reason being i go random rather than the top poem presented for i find here a popem that is full of smiles and life.
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Thank you Ian, this one is written in one of my previous life, lol, when I was around 20 Thank you for visiting this old book of my poetry.
~Sonja~
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Thank you James. This one was writen when I was in a lack with some life experiance. But, sometimes things are not going in the right direction.
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I like all your short pieces really, this is particualrly good, works really well
James
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This is such a short peice that speaks from the heart with sincerity, I really like the message you send with this, great job.
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excellent
A beautiful poem showing much wisdom. A poem of thought so well expressed. -
beautiful. These are the things I hope that I will be able to feel and see with age. I love the fact that you get your message across with a certain sense of vaguness. You do not clutter your writing with too many words. It really leaves the reader thinking. Great write.
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Great Write
This is a very nice write...and this is what everyone should strive for...happiness, and contentment with our life and what we have done with it...Very Nice Write Kudos!;F-Amy -
Very nice. Odd though, in that it doesn't really make sense. It's like an answer to a question, but you kinda wonder what question. "What is the meaning of life?" lo
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There is beauty in age, in knowing, in living a life, simply living it. To be truly wise in this world because of what we have lived, not what we know..excellent free verse here.
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see the beauty within the wise beyond their years, for they are sweet and some what majestic with their knowledge and phrases
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This is a lovely way to look at things. Often though it does not work out like this. I have worked with eldrely people, and sometimes old age is anything but bliss.
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This is very deep and thought provoking... wish I could express my self in free verse as you do... I loved the simplicity and the depth of your work... you better quickly write more... I'll be cathing up with you soon...
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Thank you, but, sometimes our wishes just remains only a wishes. Isn't that sad?
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i hope so...(lol)...
nicely penned. again. enjoyed.
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Grateful
Thank you for a nice comments. That means a lot to me because I mostly use Croatian language for my work. I am very pleased if I touched someones inner feelings with my poems. -
Lovely!
and aged be the gracious beauty, those young will never see. They see the outer perimeter most pungent underneath where the godly intention is to feel beauty with your soul and here in this peice you do!! That existence!!
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