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slippery

slipping under
slipping out
jus leave me alone
you hav no idea wha its about

so tired of waiting...
waiting for that day
when the pain stops
and you all go away

untill then, im stuck here
in my own lil ball
trying to stay sane
and forget bout you all

the cuts are deep
but the scars fade
they always do
till you cant even tell they were made

cover them up
keep my lil secret
my personal sanctuary
ill never let you steal it


slipping under
slipping out
jus leave me alone
you hav no idea wha its about

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Written March 8th, 2005

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  • denying my truth
    May 19, 2005
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    go for it, id be interested heh.


  • josh-13
    May 18, 2005
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    I like the flow, this is an awesome poem, I could make this a song so quick, I'll just leave you alone.

  • silent suffering
    March 20, 2005
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    this is simple but imaginative. Nice write.