there are two voices in this poem.
princess gwendolyn
knight, caspian
Gwendolyn
From sleep of endless dreams, awake
To land where life returns
The land where future’s not at stake
And fires of hell no longer burn
I say my love, do take me there
Where I will surely know
What use my own two hands will be
What use in times of woe
I ask you now, do I not need
A peaceful place to dwell
A quite place amongst the reeds
Safe from the fires of hell
Men like you, all one and same
Think women do not rate
They do not need a place to rest
And doom is much their fate
Oh, determined I, to show you
Where my doth my fealty lie
If you choose not to rescue me
I’ll force you to come nigh
Knight, Caspian
Do not be under false beliefs
About my heart’s desire
I’d rather die than see you here
In hell and mortal fire
But I am under orders fast
to see you bonded true
To chains of Castle Maine at last
I cannot rescue you
But when you die, don’t think of me
In sad or angry ways
for you, my love will always be
The maiden of my days.
My heart beats fast amongst my suit
Of armored steel and chain
And rest assured your death so swift
Will not have been in vain.
Gwendolyn
I hear the horses coming now
I turn my eyes away
I hear the horses coming fast
I do not wish to stay
I smell the ash and fire
That sees me to my doom
I see death’s darkened sillouhette
doth fast me to the room
Oh uncle, do you hear me now
Your wishes shall come true
With blackened heart, and tainted love
The kingship falls to you
Oh smoke and fiery torment
I’ve seen my image last
I can now no longer breathe
My end is coming fast
Caspian
I had not courage, strong or bold
To see her rescued here
I had not strength to take her hand
To allay her final fear
But if sword shall do me in
If ground by mortal blade
I swear, by knight’s strong oath am bound
My final word is Gwendolyn
Author notes
first draft of a poem in ballad stanza. am going to use it for a class exercise for a course at school. it needs work. give me support.
Written March 20th, 2005
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wow how hoeplessly romantic of you =P i loved "I swear, by knight’s strong oath am bound
My final word is Gwendolyn"
*sigh* to cute, the poem was very nice good job ^_^ -
GREAT
Very nice. strong ending!!
Thank you for the comment. -
i think the point is to be constructive (moron) but thanks anyway


