I remember the last time I kissed you
The last time my thumb trailed your face
And I remember the last time I was with you
The last time your lips were all I could taste
I remember the last fight we had
Yelling at each other ‘til we bled
I remember the last time we slept together
The last time your back was on the bed
I remember the last time you hugged me and sang
The last time you picked me up and wiped the blood from my face
I remember the last time you listened to me sing to you
And told me I was filled with way to much haste
I remember the last time I ever saw you
You were in the doorway looking at me with disbelief
You screamed you couldn’t believe what I had done
Then you drove off with great grief
I remember the last time I talked to you
It was a one way conversation, you never answered
You were six feet under me, not breathing
I think trying to tell me to move my life onward
But I can’t, because I love you still
And I can’t forget all our firsts
And all our in the middles
And how much losing you hurt
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You won’t ever know pain, until your only love is lost…forever. I don’t care if it doesn’t make sense, it’s probably ‘cause I’m currently trying to drink my pains away, and they just aren’t goin’ any where.
Written March 20th, 2005
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wow this is gorgeous! i really like this! it almost made me cry.... this is actually really sweet!
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My first true love committed suicide accidentally... so she's gone ferever... and ow I'm kinda afraid to love another... I will like someone alot but I dont think I could ever lve like I did with the one I lost... they say your first love is always the purest love because of the sheer innocence of not knowing what love is like...
I'm sorry for your loss love,
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Oh wow... this brought a tear to my eye... it's so sad.
I'm so sorry that you lost your love, that must have been the worst pain to ever go through. I can only imagine the hurt you are feeling. Don't drink your pain away 
It's not good. You have people who care about you who weould love to talk to you whenever you need it, and I'm also here. Although we really don't know each other, I'd love to be a friend to you to help you out in times in need. I loved this, great work. The emotions you portrayed with your words, it's so amazing. I could feel the pain that you feel. Memories are great to have, but sometimes those memories are what hurt us most. This was an amazing write Zave.
Take Care,
Jasmine
~Always Keep Writing~ -
people fight not knowing wht they are doing to themselves. my worst fear is my bf dying an i'll never talk to him. i couldnt imagine that happening...this was a great poem but so so so sad. im so sorry for ur loss. blessed be..shawna
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hey this was great -
oh zave hunny,i'm so sorry. this is a truely beautiful and wonderful poem, and probably one of the best you've written. and you're right. i can not imagine losing jordan forever. it would probably kill me. anyway, i'm here if you need me sweetheart. for anything. don't be afraid to talk ok? once again,wonderful poem. it get's clappy hands.
~Alex
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