"Let's date!"...
..."I love you so"...
..."Things are going okay"...
..."We seem to be moving apart"...
..."WE'RE THROUGH!"
Author notes
I thought it fit the "done me wrong" theme pretty well. 
Written March 18th, 2005
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A contest entry
- Done me wrong song's by americanrebel.
300 points, ended August 14, 2005, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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pretty good however i think you could fill it in a lil bit more than you did but over all not a bad poem -william
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Nice... Thanks for making me laugh, I needed it
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Clever! I see that as well in some Christian settings. It just reminds us that we can't make good decisions in picking a companion. I've learned that a few years ago myself, and now I'm just waiting on the Lord. He's the best matchmaker.
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This actually shows how it is to course through love like this but obviously love lasts a little longer than this!!! . I love the part when you say WE'RE THROUGH! I love that cinquain!
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You know the old saying..."been there, done that"? It just seemed fitting to put it in as few words as possible, and your poem choice opened that possibility up to me. I'm glad you got a good chuckle out of it!
It really is sad, though... how so many relationships end up like this. -
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haha, this poem actually made me laugh out loud! i like it a lot, especially the way it is formatted and the overall word choices. good job and good luck in the contest!
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