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Happy birthday................

"Happy Birthday" means much more
Than have a happy day
I never get to say
It means I love you first of all,
Then thanks for the ball
It means you mean a lot to me,
And that I'm proud of you let's go get a coffee

But most of all, I guess it means
That I am thinking of beans
Your happiness on this, your day,
With pleasure and with love anyway

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Written March 18th, 2005

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  • duana
    March 24, 2005
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    Thanks for the effort and sweetness you put into thinking about me!