Wings
Sunny, warm autumn day in the park.
We had picnicked, so I was happy, full, and lazy.
I laid down on the blanket and dozed off.
I awoke, and saw spread out about me
the beautiful vermilion, gold, and sage leaves of the trees
in the shape of lovely butterfly wings.
I saw you and smiled.
"You gave me wings." I said
"You gave me love." you smiled and kissed me
I felt the spark as sharp as a dragons tongue, bite at my lip....
I awoke with a start and looked around.
Confused as to where I was and I saw them....
Spread out on the bed was the crimson rose, and golden daisy petals
in the shape of beautiful fairy wings.
I saw you at the foot of the bed smiling.
You leaned in and kissed me softly
Then my heart fluttered....
and so did my wings.
Author notes
Written March 18th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Paying it forward by MysticalRayne.
450 points, ended December 12, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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This is enchanting - well written. You have used wonderful imagery. Best of luck
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Thank you somuch. I actually have a whole series of poems similar to this. Many thanks again.
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wonderful
i luv this
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Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed it!
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Then I guess there may be some Muse kicking going on.
You truely have been an inspiration to my heart and soul. Be Well and Be Blessed. 
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Ohhhh hun, do not beg me. Kick my muse. LOL. Sometimes she is stingy. Thank you so much for the great comments. I am enjoying this series and will be done soon. I am happy to see someone else enjoying them.
Blessed be
~~Serenity~~
Billie jean -
Billy Jean, this series just gets better and better. The thought of a love like this is only an illusion for me. I'm glad you have someone to actually make this a reality for you.
Your words are so beautiful and flow so smoothly, like silk on fine crystal. I'm afraid I am going to have to read this whole series tonight and then beg you for more. lol
Be Well and Be Blessed My Wenchly Sister.
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Oh the poor wolfie. Be nice to that man. LOL. I am so happy that my nubian sister liked this. I started out with just two and decided to do a whole series. I will stop at either 12 or 14. They are on a list called small declarations if interested in seeing them all. Thanks again so much hun. I appreciate all your encouragement.
Blessed be
~~Serenity~~
Billie Jean -
Criss....
I am so happy you liked this write. I started with just two and decided to do a whole series. I will end probably at 12 or 14. Hope you like the next ones. Thanks again hun
Blessed be
~~Serenity~~
Billie Jean -
sevina hun....
Thank you so much for yet another nice comment. I think I will end this series at either 12 or 14 writes. Perhaps someday we can knock heads some and pen together. I am glad you liked this one. I have such a love of fairys so this one means a lot to me. Thanks again hun for always supporting me
Blessed be
~~Serenity~~
Billie Jean -
sensual and sweet
Ahh the sweet taste of love or is it spring fever. This is such a tender and soft write. The kind that makes you smile from the inside out. Thank you for the little peak inside of pure love. Hey you never know, I may just decide to make nicey with the wolf...lmao. Great write. Hugs~ Cuddles -
This is Beautiful Billie Jean.
Your words brushed lightly but made a huge impact on my imagination. I could see this happening and it made me smile.
I have a special love affair with butterflies, the thought was placed in my mind by someone I love dearly but is gone from me.
Love to you,
Criss -
awww another romantic moment captured here! beautimus billie
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Oh no riots. They will never stop as long as I am inspired by....love. Thank you so much. So so much
Blessed be
~~Serenity~~``
Billie Jean -
oh, the tender incredible innocent beauty of it... this series better never stop or there will be riots in town
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