the world is dark, empty and quiet here.
alone you feel the rush of the chilling wind.
illusions of death inform you they're near.
upon the shoulder of princes you bend,
eager to consume the warmth of their eyes.
the angels hear voices and messangers send,
you'd open up to them, but its all lies.
fabrications of innocence wake you.
they crush your soul in their hand and it dies.
you reach out for them and away they flew,
flying in the cloudless skies of the night,
if you close your soul tight, you can go too.
so wake up child, you have nothing to fear.
walk the hillside of a glistening tear.
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please tell me what you think. i could always use some constructive criticism
Written March 18th, 2005
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