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I want a bottle of tea mam,

I want a bottle of tea mam,
That's all i seem to hear,
I want a bottle of tea mam,
Them words are constantly in my ear.

He drinks from his bottle all day long,
I try to give him a cup but he wouldn't have one.
He also likes a dummy or two,
When its time to take them off him i don't know what I'll do.

This little boy is now nearly three,
And can you tell by the poem,
That he loves a bottle of tea!!!!!

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Written March 18th, 2005

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  • fullmoon
    March 22, 2005
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    thank you for commenting on my poem i will return the favor heheh

  • nice tush
    March 18, 2005
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    hee hee hee, this is good. very true