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Mati Hari

They called me Mata Hari
and they taught me how to dance
and they made me give up everything
without one bit of romance

They named me Mata Hari
and I danced all night, all day
but they soon tired of dancing
and I could not make them stay

When I was Mata Hari
and I danced for fighting men
I lived in dreams, behind smoke screens
they adored me, praised me, then

They loved me, Mati Hari
for I danced among the best
and when they came so weary
I gave them place to rest

And I, still Mati Hari
danced 'til I could dance no more
they called me spy, said I would die,
denounced me as a whore

My name was Mata Hari
and I danced for kings and queens
and my mocking kiss 'fore firing squad
will haunt them in their dreams

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Written March 17th, 2005

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  • XxIHateYouTooxX
    June 5, 2005
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    This is beautiful, it makes me think of a fairy tale or a legend. I love how it sort of falls into place in a smooth dancing-esque rhythm. I like it a lot, great job!

  • mrs jesse mccartney
    April 10, 2005
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    luv it

    this is awesome, i luv dancin

  • HeavenBesideYou
    April 10, 2005
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    Very orignal, seemed like a song when i read it. It was pretty cool. I liked it...

  • reptilia
    April 10, 2005
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    Fantastic

    This was amazing. I loved the originality of it!
    Siobhan!


  • jeii
    April 10, 2005
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    brilliant !

    oo !! i love it !! soo beautifully written ! i love the plot of this .. i agree with lurch , i love how it unfolds . very well done ! keep up the great worrk ! <3

    x0o j0yCee*


  • lurch
    March 18, 2005
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    sweet

    Brilliant. The poem seems like a song when you read it. I like the way the poem unfolds. Keep on writing \m/!!!

    -lurch

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