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Absolutely Loved

I want to feel-
need to feel
the pressure of your fingers
on the right places
(the places that make me squirm
and blush beneath your touch).

I need to feel
the want rising
rapid and free
(overflowing
into the movements
of my body with yours).

I want to feel-
(want to know
the limit of ecstasy
just beyond “oh God
no more”)
need to be
absolutely loved
by you.

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Written March 17th, 2005

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    April 27, 2007

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    I need to feel all those things too, and so does every woman. You hit it on the head, beautiful write. whisper


  • Joe Spencer
    March 25, 2005
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    I'm looking for a woman that can show me what she is feeling, I put my all in a relationship and hope to find a woman like that.I want a woman I can respect, who can also treat right as her other half.I want a woman that can give me all the attention. I want feel loved. Like you have expressed in this poem here.


  • PiratexxLove
    March 17, 2005
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    "i want to feel,
    want to know,
    the limit of ectasty,
    just beyond "oh god no more"
    wow i really like this poem
    ur a good writter
    it flows so wonderfully
    keep up good work