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A Dog's Life

 

puppylarge.gif puppy large picture by SunshineUK

Sixteen years, now almost seventeen,
I've played at stick and ball, stayed seldom still
until good master's call would whistle shrill
to lead me back - no need to smack.  Sight keen.

Sixteen years tail's wagged as faithful friend,
as boon companion, running round fun years.
His mother passed away, I shared the tears
that fountained forth and never seemed to end.

Sixteen years round each revolving moon
from hearth and home I pick up slightest sound,
ears prick, eyes bright, in sight I'm always found
to hold my ground, though often play buffoon.

Sixteen years, come rain or shine, we walk
twice, sometimes thrice a day, I sense each smell
around the house, know friends and rascals well,
and after dinner hear the table talk.

Sixteen years from pet to family,
from playful pat to priceless kith and kin,
I vet as threat who'd twins' affections win,
can smell a rat or chase cat up a tree.

Sixteen years I've watched the children grow,
suffered unruly hands that now caress,
I guard them still, still at the same address,
as I will willing till my turn to go.

Sixteen years saw summers shedding hair,
saw autumns' colours charm birds from the trees,
saw winter whiteness whose bare branches' frieze
prepared for springs unbounded, weather fair.

Sixteen years, milk - nap - home-made pap brew,
from toothless start, heart full, until depart,
toothless, heart filled beyond all man may chart,
life's cycle spins till ready to renew.

Sixteen years that gambolled life away,
with water, beef and bone, I’ve played at will.
Scents seem less sharp today, and soon I will
make my last bow - still in thrill dreams I play !



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Animated Labrador Puppy - thanks to Sue Morten


Labrador Old  
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Definition gambol : play boisterously, light-hearted recreational activity for diversion or amusement
Definition vet : wordplay implying 'case the joint' or oversee more than in the sense of animal doctor
Definition frieze : horizontal band of sculpted or painted decoration
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In terms of life expectancy 1 'dog year' around between 6 and 7 human years. 16 is thus  approximately between 100 and 110. The world record for a cat's life is 38.

 


Stanza 3 : John Dryden Absalom and Achitophel, pt. 1, l. 545-50 (1681) Zimri,
But in the course of one revolving moon
Was chemist, fiddler, statesman and buffoon...
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The initial poem wrote itself, drawn through and by a 16 year old labrador that joined four people in a small car for a long trip from Paris to St. Tropez New Year 1991/1992 ... 'and thereon hangs a tail's tale'

 

Jonathan Robin

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  • Wutz Luv
    November 18
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    Nice write. I have 6 dogs. Thank you for entering my contest.

  • Montey silver member
    November 17
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    Loved this, written from the dogs perspective,especially the line about listening to the table talk because thats how it must seem to a dog.Also, my compliments to whoever did the background too.Good luck in the contest.Montey


  • lovlilmystery
    November 12
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    This is a wonderful poem, of a someone special in your family. A pet is to me, sometimes considered to be just like a part of ones' family. Great poem. Thanks for entering my contest. Take care and have a great day.

    Sandi


  • Golden Song
    November 10
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    shweet - very easy to relate to, as i have a dog as well
    x

  • beezer16
    November 6
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    Sounds like you have an intimate knowledge of man's best friend. Fine work.


  • Rosefrn silver member
    October 30
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    Already read this before but still its amazing. good luck in my contest!


  • PoetryKitten
    October 28

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    what a wonderful poem! I could almost hear a dog voice in my head listening to it tell me the tale of it's life.. this is quite well done

  • ♥awww♥

    that is the cutest puppy picture. it's what caught my attention and made me stay for this wonderful poem.

  • Sieze-the-moment
    October 22
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    Very good

  • Haret5
    October 17

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    Great Poem

    The poem was very good. It makes me feel sad that the dog is dying though but that means the poem served its purpose and made me feel something. Good Job.


  • lindaburns gold member
    October 17

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    HAPPY LITTLE PROMPTS

    Three gold trophies and a silver.  And all of those favorable comments. Wow. Congratulations! Thank you for entering my contest.


  • Jonathan ROBIN
    October 16
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    Contest Linda Burns

    10. Puppies
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  • Aalta silver member
    October 11

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    I kept imagining inside, as I read, I could almost visualize the old dog looking back fondly on its life... all the bitter sweet memories without which life wouldn't have been life!!..... no regret only loads of love. .... this is just so touching :

    -Aalta

  • wayter321
    October 9
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    wonderful and very on point with a dogs life!

  • henryjoe
    October 6
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    Very interesting. It really is a dogs life.

  • hend shaheen
    October 5

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    WOW!!! I like those pics really cute......I love dogs but ma parents dont ..so I dont have one....well written...thanxx for taking time to enter and good luck

  • Beautifully written. Maybe I will write a poem about my Husky now. He is one and his name is Jax.


  • sinfull
    October 3

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    The bond and affection wethin which we hold our pets is amazing. This pen is amazing. seems to touch on all aspects that a dog might deem as noteworthy, humor..insight ...value of expression...you wear the crown.

  • I'm absolutely a dog person. This poem reminded me why. They're loyal, they're gracious, and they reward you if you get to know them.

    Stunning write.


  • Tmiller248
    October 1

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    Beautiful

    Heartfelt and well written. You can feel the love and respect you have for this family member. I have a yellow lab who is still 1 year young and annoyingly adorable. thanks for sharing this with us

    this is a five pointer but i have no points left,t


  • Wickedruby1 gold member
    September 30

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    Excellent

    The love a pet leaves a family is never repaid in full,they are our colsest friend, our shoulder to cry on, our sounding board and sometimes scapegoat.There are no bad pets just bad masters.


  • sweetpearl
    September 30

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    Aw, what a nice poem. I have two labradors and a golden retriever. My labs are young (2 and 1) but the golden is 10 and still in great shape. I hope mine live this long!!


  • breannawilliams
    September 30
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    Wonderful poem! I love it a lot!

  • hezakiah
    September 30

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    This was one of the first poems that I read when I discovered Ap back in July. Of course, I like it. But this time I noticed the interesting end rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing.


  • Jay Dead
    September 25

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    HOLY CRAP!!!

    sorry about all the caps but sheesh.....1,288 comments under me! DAMN lol i know you've heard this literally a thousand times but great write anyways.


  • Tqop
    September 25
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    How cute! Thanks for your entry.

  • Figaro
    September 25
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    What a beautiful poem.

  • sharper
    September 24
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    Applause

    Forgot to add applause ... oversight corrected

  • sharper
    September 24

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    A stunningly personification portrait from a dog's point of view. Amazing write as this poem is so inspirational. Thanks for a wonderful read keep up the excellent work....and i loved the pictures of the dogs. The repetition underscored the effect and it enhanced one's ability imagine time passing and all the little things that make up a dog's day. As mentionned below Fantastic poem, great interpretation of a dog's life, with some truly striking verses. Thanks for sharing

  • msjuicytech
    September 23

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    Aww this is really creative... Congrats on all your winnings with it, you deserve it ;-)

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