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Seductress

Seductress, she hides in the dark.
Innocent, he stays behind the light.
Fragile, she falls apart in his arms.
Gentle, he holds her tight.
Broken, she can no longer grin.
Caring, he fixes her smile.
Cold, she shivers in his arms.
Kind, he lets her stay a while.
Needy, she feeds off his cheer.
Gladly, he gives it to her.
Renewed, she smiles again.
Relieved, he sees she is better.
Grinning, her lips meet his.
Loving, his fingertips touch her skin.
Seductress, she knows just what to do.
Innocent, he has no choice but to give in.

Author notes

Yeah, its kinda weird, but I did it real quick and I'm pretty fond of it...it was just ramble from me.
Written March 17th, 2005

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  • jstrauch
    August 7, 2006
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    great

    hey this is really good i like it a lot great write