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lifeless soul

Don't tell me I am skinney
Don't tell me who I am
Don't make me eat
Please don't tell me i am pretty...
Because I am not
When I think my life is over..
It's really just began
You don't know how thin is to thin
You don't know when to stop
The feel of it comming up your throught makes you feel as you have acomplishesd something
A lifeless soul
With no heart to love with
The pills you pop just don't seem to be enough
The thought of what if your parents find out
Will they be mad?
Just a lifeless soul
Will they be ashamed to find there so called "perfect" daughter not so perfect.
They may and may not
This is my life..
And my lifeless soul

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Written March 17th, 2005

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  • -Tainted- LOoVe
    March 18, 2005
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    jessica, i understand this..so much..wow..this is sooo...wow!I love it, and jessica you are perfect the way you are babe! i love you!