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Anniversary Number Three

Today is anniversary number three
And still I cannot believe
You left me on this fateful day
You're so selfish, nothing left to say
This day has become on I can't bear
I used to be happy, but now just a blank stare
My day of birth used to be full of life
Now its your day of death, you abused that knife
A depressed and dark life is all I live
Because you always took, never give

You left me three years ago today
You selfish asshole, just go away
Get out of my mind
The pain is making me blind
You took my four best friends with you
Forgiving you is something I just won't do

On this day I remember your death day
The anniversary that used to be my birthday

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Written March 17th, 2005

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  • ashton14
    May 11, 2005
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    Awww. Im sorry this is soooo sad. You written it so well. Great job.


  • March 24, 2005
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    Hmmm... not sure what to say about this... considering I don't really understand what happened. Sounds depressing... but written with lots of emotion. Pen on.

    sonya

  • Liquid punk
    March 18, 2005
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    Im sorry that you are feeling like that! But yeah.. it is a interesting piece on which you created the angst.. great wording, awesome poem!!

    Mark