Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Friend

You've Been What They Want To See,
Tell Me Who YOU Want To Be.
I Can't Tell You What To Do,
But While You Ask,
Yeah You're A Fool.

Why Do You Do What They Say,
Never Thought You'd Be That Way.
I Thought You Were Strong Enough
To Turn Away,
You're Not In Love.

She's Tainted You,
She Made You Blind.
She Made You Hide Yourself Inside.
She Wanted To You To Fade Away..
Tell Her It Wont Be That Way!

I Miss You The Way You Were.
All Those Times She's Made You Hurt.
And Still You're Always There For Her.
I Can't Stand To Watch You There.

Come To Me When She Makes You Cry.
Next Time That She Says Goodbye.
I'm Always Here, Because I'm Your Friend.
She Doesn't Deserve You,
That's The End..


Author notes

This Is About A Friend Of Mine Who Lets A Certain Person Treat Him Really Badly.. Even Though He Has Lost A Lot Of Friends Becuase Of Her..
Written March 17th, 2005

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Rachael -Tigre-
    March 17, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    thank you!


  • lostsouls12
    March 17, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    this is a really good poem. i relate it in so many ways. i can feel all the emotion in it