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To the future

even though it hurts
even though i cry
i wish i could fly away
fly away where no one can find me
even tough it hurts
even though i cry
i will try to look to the future
forget my past
and see how long i last
my life has gone so fast
all of what i have loved
all of what i have seen
my smile
my life
it will get better
the best way to do it
is to sit back
and enjoy what happening
around me
or whats the point of living

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Written March 17th, 2005

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  • MissPumpkinKing
    March 29, 2005
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    bless, i never knew you could be this emotionanal! good work gorgeous


  • Neon Highway
    March 25, 2005
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    Amazing. Poor luke sweet poem thopugh preppy


  • Methadone Pretty
    March 18, 2005
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    awwwwwness....i will write a nice comment seen as you are sat next to me!! erm....well i'll be honest....i lurve it....i think so many people can relate to this poem its fantastic pink hair rae?!?!?!? anyway back to the poem....amazing

  • SixPennyGirl
    March 17, 2005
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    awwwwwwwww luke bless this is really emotional although i hoep you actually wrote this one!! i jokes but bless who'd have thought that the guy wit pink hair cud be so sweet

    rae x x