do words mean anything to you
or do you juss think its weak
i thought you were suppose to be my bo
but now you wont even let me speak.
do my thoughts mean anything
or do you deny them anyway
maybe im juss a fling
and it dont matter what i say.
does anything you do make sense
is it me always wrong
do you laugh at my every expense
my days with you are very long
Author notes
Written March 17th, 2005
A contest entry
- Over 250 Poems by zhaniswolf.
350 points, ended July 23, 2007, 42 entries
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the last line didn't seem to fit, but the rest of the poem wasn't half bad.
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Interesting Questions. And I have one for you. What is a Juss? or is it suppost to be JUST.
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Love it u should write a book!LOL!
*~Erica~* -
I love this poem.. but the last sentence in the very last stanza could be a lil better. But all in all i like it!
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