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Ocean Sounds (Lanturne)

shell
listen
ocean sound
echoes in ear
peace

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WHY DO I SMELL LIKE A TACO
Written March 17th, 2005

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  • Sandygram
    March 17, 2005
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    Thank you so much for your nice comment, I appreciate it. Take care, Sandy


  • x9Nocturnal9x
    March 17, 2005
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    I found this very calming and relaxing..your lanturne seems to sooth the savage beast a.k.a me! Anyway I liked this entry just as much as your other one! Beautiful write and best of luck in the contest (yet again)
    -Lis


  • CarterTachikawa
    March 17, 2005
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    Very, very soothing poem. I, too, woke up to a snowy morning and I really needed to read something warm and calming. Very good. Thanks for entering and good luck!

    ~CT


  • just rob gold member
    March 17, 2005
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    What a soothing poem.Just what I needed on a snowy morning.