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A Taste Of Honey (Lanturne)

bees
nectar
pollinate
flower's honey
sweet

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WHY DO I SMELL LIKE TACOS
Written March 17th, 2005

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  • Sandygram
    March 17, 2005
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    Thank you for the nice comment. I didn;t know there was another bee one. Oh well, I should have checked. Take care, Sandy


  • x9Nocturnal9x
    March 17, 2005
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    This may not have been the first entry about bees but it's just as creative and original! I really liked this one Great lanturne and best of luck in the contest!
    -Lis


  • CarterTachikawa
    March 17, 2005
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    Another really good lanturne about bees. Very, very nice. Thanks once again for entering and good luck!

    ~CT