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Chester Bunny And The Egg Hunt (3)

Chester Bunny was excited, it was time to hide Easter eggs
First Chester must dye them, pretty colors of blue and red
Chester dyed all of his eggs, they were looking pretty good
He hid them all over the farm, did everything that he should

He woke up on Easter morning, hopped right out of the door
The Easter hunt was over, Chester was angry and very sore
Every morning ole Red rooster,  crowed cock- a-doodle- do
Chester would wake right up, he'd say good morning to you

Red rooster was mad at Chester, Red's girlfriend was Suzy hen
After she had laid all her eggs, Chester took them from the pen
So Red didn't wake Chester, he thought, I'll get even with you
Chester missed the egg hunt, there was no cock-a-doodle- do


He began feeling really bad, for the wrong thing he had done

He knew he must apologize to Suzy hen in front of everyone
Chester Bunny said, " I am sorry", to Red rooster and Suzy too

They handed him a basket, full of Easter eggs dyed red and blue









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Written March 16th, 2005

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  • Amythest Moonjade
    April 17, 2006
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    Congratulations

    Merry meet,
    Congratulations on winning the Gold. I take it from reading the other posts here, that Chester is serious bunny with a calling. I'll have to look up Chester's other adventures. Again, Congratulations on winning the Gold.

    Amythest


  • wtchr
    April 16, 2006
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    Congratulations on winning 1st place in the contest. Your poem is very cute and pleasing. I'm sure youngsters will enjoy hearing or reading it over and over. I enjoyed this whole contest, your poem was a VERY bright spot.


  • Silky Origami
    April 11, 2006
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    hahaha cute!! so warming and just a great story/poem thank you for entering!!! goodlucks the pic is wonderful too Pj's


  • Autumn Whisper
    January 15, 2006
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    lol, another great part to The Adventures Of Chester, as i call it, lol Nice one, keep up the marvellous work grandma
    best wishes as always
    grandson


  • Sandygram
    May 3, 2005
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    Thank you sweet sue ( sis ). I will have to come up with one. I hope you start writing lots of poems. Love Sandy

  • Linda Sue silver member
    May 2, 2005
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    when are you going to write another poem about Chester? Maybe one for Mother's Day. Your Chester Bunny poems are my favorite! Love. sweet sue

  • Sandygram
    March 17, 2005
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    Ahh! Chester Bunny thanks you. And I thank you too pozo. It was nice hearing from you. Hope all is well. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram
    March 17, 2005
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    Thank you so much Rene. It is great to hear from you. Hope things are working out for you my friend. You take care and keep writing those beautiful poems. Take care, Sandy
    Edited on Mar 17, 10:28 because ''.

  • Sandygram
    March 17, 2005
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    Thank you so much for the nice comment. I hope your gradchildren enjoy it. My 7 year old grandaughter liked it. Take care, Sandy


  • Sandygram
    March 17, 2005
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    Thank you for the lovely comment. I do appreciate it. Take care, Sandy

  • pozo
    March 17, 2005
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    Aww this is such a sweet write I loved the story here, a great little write for Easter
    Thanks for your comment,
    Pozo


  • teardrop gold member
    March 17, 2005
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    Sandy!
    This is so adorable! I love it! I am still smiling from ear to ear. I even read this to my son.

    Thanks!@

    Rene'


  • just rob gold member
    March 16, 2005
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    This is wonderful.I will read it to my grandchildren on easter morning.Delightful write.
    Peace,Rob


  • PowerOfLove
    March 16, 2005
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    Exceptional

    What a delightful children's poem, I believe it should be published, the little ones would love it! You are so gifted, please keep up the writing. Peace be with you, Take care, Heather

  • Sandygram
    March 16, 2005
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    Hippity Hop, Hippity Hop. Here come Chester Bunny. This is my 3rd Chester poem. I love writing children's poems but I find them the most difficult. I hope you enjoyed you dinner. I'm sure you had a wonderful time. God Bless you. Thank you for the nice comments. Take care, Sandy


  • March 16, 2005
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    Very sweet!

    Heheheheh, this was just darling Sandy, I was chuckling with joy half way through... I knew Red was going to be mad, lol... Wonderful my friend, I love the heartwarming end.... all the best my dear friend, what a joy! God bless, Annie

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