The nightmare ache of suicide
The razor’s edge
Black pool of all infinity
laps coolly at the edge
Eternity, uncertainty
fuse darkly overhead
No filter on reality
No fear for death’s quiet tread
Dire hologram of nothing
Dark awful pit of doom
Long, deathless tomb
Charleston’s womb
Eternal void - come soon
Author notes
Written March 16th, 2005
A contest entry
- More Darkness! by SinningSaint.
300 points, ended March 29, 2005, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow weirdly worded but good i enjoyed reading it (REALLY) I hate it when pl say shit and they r just lying about it lol keep up the great work
Sara -
Umm...please put the poems you commented on, and a certain line *cough* See rules for more info. You've got till tomorrow, thanks!
Edited on Mar 16, 8:13 p.m. because ''. -
great writing
This was a great poem. I really liked it. I read it 3 times cuz it's sooo good. Good luck in the contest.
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