Touched.. oh...so softly...
as with an angel's breath...
held gently... on the wing...
dipping and swaying with
the flow..of warm currents..
light fractures... momentarily
as shattering glass...splintered..
colours radiate....highlights of
silver glisten....against the clear
blue backdrop.....broken only by
a blink........a heartbeat
Author notes
I watched a bird today fighting with the elements and it's desire to land......
Written March 16th, 2005
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love it.
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Thank you suseann
delighted that you enjoyed this 
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Thank you I do enjoy writing nature poems as they are constantly changing... Many thanks for your kind comments
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I never mind the comments Thank you so much
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wow, i keep saying it, your such a great writer, i hope u dont mind all the comments, im sure there is more to come, i try to comment on each poem i read, this is great
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Beautiful
This is a beautiful write and one that I hope you continue to write these type of poems. It did not disappoint me. -
Very pretty write.And I love the sweet bird picture too.--Suseann
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Many thanks for your kind comments
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Thank you my friend I am pleased you found this enjoyable....nature has a wonderful way of weaving its magic...but to try and capture the essence is virtually impossible....but I keep trying
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Many thanks Veira Ash, delighted that you enjoyed this poem
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Very enchanting, it took my emotions on a ride. This is a very good piece. I enjoyed it very, very much. Good job!
My favorite thing about this piece though is that you can picture what you are writing in your head. EXCELLENT!
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Very beautiful my friend, a lovely write, so full of such wonderful feeling, this is a great poem, the structure is very different to most but works well, all the best my friend it was a pleasure to read, hugs Di
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Wow, I loved this. I got such a light, peaceful feeling while reading this. Very well done.
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Thank you Aisha I am delighted that you enjoyed this poem. Many thanks for your kind comments
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Thank you Kimberly ...yes nature does bring out the best in all of us. I am delighted you enjoyed this .
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Thank you I am delighted that you enjoyed this poem, many thanks for your lovely comments
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Thank you so much for your very kind comments, they are appreciated
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Thank you Robin I am so pleased you enjoyed this poem...I have a soft spot for it also I have probably missed the entry for Mystical Lady's contest, but I will bear it in mind for the next time ...Hope all is well in your world
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Thank you wattle for the kind words and applause Glad you enjoyed this
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Ms Cutie, this is quite a calming image, the words flow through the air to the reader. - Thank you
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Awe Lynne, as a bird lover, this really got to me. How beautiful and worthy of applause. Did you know MagicLady is having a bird contest right now? I'm not sure if it's closed or not but this would've been a great entry.
~Lyrical
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It's desire and utter dedication to make a landing as perfect and delicate as it can make it. An breath-taking sight to behold. I love your use of "....", it just allows the reader to think while they read, which they need to do in an imagery poem like this. Keep it up, I like it a lot
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what to say about your work at the risk of repeating others reviews , just beautiful my friend , if only all poetry had the grace of your work .
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Oh my! This is so stunning! You have painted an awesome picture here for the reader Cutiepie. This is nature at it's best isn't it? So many inspirations. It's funny how nature gives us glimpses of hope every single day, in the most simple ways. I just love this.
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Great poem
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Thank you Jim ...according to the dictionary it only allows disjointed but I rather like "disjointedness" ....has a nice ring
Glad you enjoyed this
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I haven't been by to read any of your new ones lately. Sorry about that. But I do like this one. The dis-jointed-ness {is that a word? } of the lines only adds to the feeling of watching that poor bird try to land.
Very nicely done.
Write On!
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Thank you Damon for your continued support it is as always appreciated
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This is a truly beautiful poem, and I love the picture too. You always do wonderful work my Irish friend. See you again soon.
Damon D. Brewer
Edited on Mar 19 because ''.
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