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Flowers

The
Yucca
blooms open,
beauty in the
night.

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Why do I smell like tacos?
Written March 16th, 2005

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  • WelshMafia
    April 5, 2005
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    thanks....^_^


  • Abscessed
    April 5, 2005
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    this is absolutely stunning...i love this kind of poetry which is so descriptive and so meaningful in just a few words....i think only people with alot of talent can manage to create such beauties....so well done!!!

  • WelshMafia
    March 17, 2005
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    thanks! ^_^


  • x9Nocturnal9x
    March 17, 2005
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    Yucca seems like a strange name for something beautiful..you took the weird name and made it beautiful once again! I love this lanturne! A humorous sounding name is used in a beautiful form to make it beautiful once again..great write and best of luck in the contest!
    -Lis


  • CarterTachikawa
    March 16, 2005
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    Another very beautiful poem. I enjoyed this a lot. Everything looks good. Thanks for entering and good luck!

    ~CT

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