Remembrance
This goes out to the one I love,
Though she may be gone,
She can be glimpsed through stars above,
Soul as bright as fire, shone.
Jet black locks, gently flowing,
Ethereal perfection, ever present,
Azure orbs, with life glowing,
Time looking through them, spent.
Though my words may not reach her,
Forgotten, she will never be,
Destined, we were never together,
Always distant, too far to see.
Forever, she will reside in my heart,
Given new life, a fresh start.
Author notes
This is my first inclusion, basically a sonnet form. It's about someone bery special to me, and it's just how I feel about it. Please comment.
Written October 2nd, 2005
A contest entry
- Dark poetry by dolltrashhh-.
500 points, ended March 21, 2005, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Thanks guys, it's nice to know it's appreciated....thank you very much
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i really enjoyed this poem. as said above, the vocabulary that was used was wonderful. good luck to you in the contest!
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Very Good
Ditto on what FifthDove said. I like this one too. You got a good style, can't wait to see what you write next
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I love the vocabulary you a woven into this write.
A very beautiful poem
“Azure orbs, with life glowing”
Caught my eye and seem to be the heart-beat of the poem.
I see you are new to Ap.
WELCOME
to the site and keep on writing…… Cindy
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