Brushing away the bickering breeze
The trees rising fingertips rejoice
Hand in hand, dance the branches and leaves
Daunting the breaths rhetorical voice
Silken blue drapes overlap the sand
Refreshed to ripen the tranquil stone
Crashing cascade with a savoured hand
On the pebble where droplets have flown
Magical humming flutters nearby
Chanting to life’s newborn creation
The open blossom spills a syrup
Luring the cherub to temptation
Branches softly quiver in the wind
The oceans waves cloak the jewelled reef
A sweetened bee captures the nectar
As natures aura proves with belief
Author notes
3. write a poem about nature...preferabley nice and beautiful...dark nature is also allowed
Written March 16th, 2005
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I love the rhythm to this. The imagry is awsome. I can never get nature poems that don't have imagry, its like a contredition in terms. The rhyming is great in this. It uses new rhymes, set apart from the everyday rhymes. I think this would be better with a different titel though. I didn't think I would like the poem because of the titel, which goes to show its true to never judge a book or poem by the cover, because I do like this poem. It will be hard for anyone to beet it. Anyway, keep up the good worka nd thanks for entering my contest.
Bowie of the knife and spear,
Rose of the thorns,
Morner of the lost. -
this was breathtaking and beautiful well done and thnks for enterin xxxxxxxxx
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Thanks very much for your comment. I'm glad you understood as i often get comments that the subjects and meaning my poetry is somewhat difficult to grasp. Take care,
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excellent
This is an excellent piece. Even without the last explanatory verse I knew and understood what this poem was about,Not always the case in some poetry
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