pierce
the world
lithe cheetah
be not confined
fly
Author notes
These are so fun, I had to do another one....
Oh, and by the way....
"Why do I smell like tacos?" aka I read the rules! 
Written March 15th, 2005
A contest entry
- Lanturnes (Ends in three days) by CarterTachikawa.
325 points, ended March 18, 2005, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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This was really pretty. You said a lot without actually saying too many words which a lot of poets can make the mistake of.
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hoooooh
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come 2 the dark side we have kookies
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awesome poem. I love cheetahs too!
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I love the vocabulary you put into here..a lot of people add in "the" or "a" and such just for the sake of filling in a missing syllable or two..you avoided using those worn-out words and managed to put together an amazing lanturne! Best of luck in the contest
-Lis
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Very, very interesting. One of the better lanturnes I've read here so far. Excellent form. Well done. And yes, you read the rules! Well done. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Great poem which I liked a lot, interesting form Keep writing, this was a good poem and very well written
All the best,
Pozo
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A wonderful write once again Ashlee, you are excellent at these Lanturnes, always vivid to the imagination! All the best in the contest, and yes, the rules, lol,
"Why did I smell like tacos?" heheheh, Love, Annie 
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