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Your unchanging character brings me comfort

Tick; Tock

The melodious, rhythmic constancy floats into my ears soothing my worries of the day
And brings me to silent, still thoughts of you and your constancy alike
Resizing my focus to the proceedings outside of my negligible world
Of which I become so preoccupied inside
While monotonous and redundant to some, this holds to me some deeper meaning
The proclamation of the coming of change, carried by a seemingly invariable object
This in itself holds some beauty as it brings me thoughts of yours

Life rests on the threads of time, while you hold time in your hands

Author notes

"Ashleigh loves Steven"
not satisfied with the title of this poem but i suppose it will do, or i may change it if icome up with something better.
Written March 13th, 2005

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  • Chad Lough
    March 16, 2005
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    CaraBeth Taylor... you are an amazing poet!! Well congrats on another trophy!!!

    I love you baby! God is great!


  • twistedsister
    March 16, 2005
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    The title of the poem would be better if it wasn't longer than the poem itself!J/K I like it !