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Boundaries

Boundaries

Love knows no boundaries
Love is simply blind
Love knows nothing of hate
Love is simple and pure
Love knows not black or white
Love is the voice of your heart
Love knows not young or old

But…

Boundaries have been set by you
Blindness does not apply to you
Hatred know SO much of lone
Comes and impure are words known to love
Racism means there’s a line drawn there
My heart beats to a different tune
Young and old must stay separated.

Wait…

What about me?
What about my people?
What if love makes us silenced?
What do you make of me?
What can be done to change this?
What kind of person are you?
What am I talking about?

Now…

My love doesn’t count
My people live in fear
My kind of love brings so much hurt
My eyes see your are suffer from a phobia
My knowledge says not much more can be done
My eyes say you’re a monster
My loves are girls and guys.

Still…

Love knows no boundaries
Love is simply blind
Love knows nothing of hate
Love is simple and pure
Love knows not black or white
Love is the voice of your heart
Love knows not young or old
Love is there between people of the same sex
Love knows not male or female

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Hey...I want your opinions...nice or hateful!
Written March 15th, 2005

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  • lilb420
    April 20, 2005
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    excellent

    wow i really think that there is a lot of emotional and i think that you have a lot of potential i really liked your poem and i likedx the way your heart came out in it god job and never stop writing !!! good luck in the contest although you prolly wont need it !!!! ull do fine i own th econtest ! so i know....