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Falling Into Frustration


Filled with Frustation

Not knowing the outcome of a problem
Isn't so easy not knowing just how
Working through it as best as possible
Searching for answers hardly ever found

Quiet cries become uncontrollable
Feelings of abandonment will soon drown
Ironic; someone keeps from a stumble
Hands pulled far away from loud cries for help

Intensions are seemily in one's sight
Understanding is obviously masked
Explanations are lost in translation
Nothing contained to apply to the tasks

Solutions thought to be correct and true
Appear as an authentic end  written
Turned in expecting effort's due
Only to spend hours in frustration

Madame Mystery    

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Written March 15th, 2005

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  • Lencio Rodrigues
    June 16, 2005
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    How true what you say!!! I can relate so much to this. Even after trying so much to get out of our problems, we many times spend hours and hours in them unable to get out which is very very frustrating. This is a very nice poem with a lot of thoughts in it. Well done.


  • Imagine Disaster
    June 11, 2005
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    i read your peace and i see where your coming from my friend
    but on the up side it was writen wounderfuly
    Tasha


  • petitemaverick
    April 17, 2005
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    This is a thoughtful piece;you seem to have done a lot of 'research' in your mind about how to accurately voice not thoughts of frustration, but the whole process involved in making one frustrated - how the feeling of frustration comes to be. Unlike Nelak, I don't know the personal side to this, maybe bcos I don't know YOU personally, but as a mere reader, I have to say this is one unique piece. As a poet, you have rare courage of tackling an often tackled subject but with a different angle.


  • Nelak
    March 15, 2005
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    I love you sis

    Jani,

    Ohhh sis..... know that I'm always here for you!! I wish things would be better for you, I really do. I know it is just easy to say that things will work out, you just have to give it time. You have the heart to do anything you desire... if you can't do it, then it is okay. I love you -always remember that. I'll never stop telling you that. Feel better and don't let the pressure get to you.

    ~ Kalen