Everyday I go through life,
With a smile pasted to my face.
When you ask,
I tell you I'm fine.
I don't let anyone in.
I hide all of my feelings,
Anger, sadness, hate, even happiness at times.
I must be good at hiding it all,
Because when I tell you I'm fine,
You believe me.
Now I'm reaching out,
I'm letting you know
I'm NOT fine.
I need your help.
I'm telling you how I really feel,
All the anger, hate, and pain that's in me.
I go through life hating every moment of it.
I'm calling for you now,
I need your help!
It's the only time I'm going to let you know,
How I really feel.
Help me!
I need you!
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Written March 15th, 2005
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yeah... i only have 2 friends in the whole world i let no how i feel... thanx for the comment
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i used 2 hide my feelings but i decided to tell my friends wats really goin on in my life.great poem! thanx for the comment on i am me, i would like 2 get 2 know you a little more.
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i have learned to hide my feelings, but i have had 20 years to learn how. but, now i met my match, i met someone who sees straight through me and can tell i am lying and he is 3000 miles away. everyone else falls for the lies except for him.
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Yes, see this is a great write!! Thanks for giving me a special preview, lol. Though it is kinda sad...
aimp,
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dont worry i no wat u mean... i thought it sounded like a prayer too and in a way i guess it sorta is... lol
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thanx! i only have 2 friends in the whole world i let know how i really feel.
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Great poem! Really, I loved it. It sounded almost like a prayer, and if it's not, please don't take it the wrong way. That sounds like the prayer I prayed, and Jesus did answer. I hope you feel better and that whoever you're letting know about your feelings will help you.
<33 Casey -
this is a really nice poem, i know exactly what you mean about not letting anyone know how you feel....its kind of like an instant reaction, when someone asks you how you are you always say 'fine thanks' even though that might not be the case - same with me. this is great that you are letting someone in, its always great when you can trust someone like that, it makes all the difference and i hope that you feel better having let someone into that part of your life, well done on a great poem xxx-xxx
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