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Sea of tears

My tears cascade and corrode my cheeks
As I remember how I drowned
Into your eyes
And drifted into your arms like Sand to the sea
And then you dropped me
After swimming in each other
I fell like a stone through your sea
And now it seems as though
I can't stop sinking
My love for you is never ending
But there must be a bed somewhere
where I can lay and regain my consciousness of Life
Then, and only then can I my heart inflate again
And be able to float and drift to safe ground
Maybe then some sea will float my body with more security
And not harden me
So I become stone to feeling.

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Written March 15th, 2005

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  • Praise his name
    March 16, 2005
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    Love is never ending well in my case isn't it such a wonderful thing. I for one never would of dreamed of being so in love at only 17 wonderful write.
    God Bless
    Mary