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Comfort

The characters are illuminated by a light only visible to me.
Words strung into patterns
Beautiful, radient patterns
Nobody else can see.
Paper still carrying a scent
Long forgotten, but it reawakes slowly
Gently
And I smile.
It all rushes back
The love
Dispite the distance, it still remains.
Paranoia swept away on a wave of elation
Music sweeps through me
Lifting me on its crest as it rips through the air.
Im free!
Free of the fear!
Gone!
Smashed back into my body.
Notes ringing in my ears.
They wrap themselves around me
Comfort me
Caress me
Your arms.
All is meaningless now
When your love is with me

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Woooooooooooooooooooooooot!
Written March 15th, 2005

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  • Musical Anomaly
    March 16, 2005
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    Wow, someone's happy! Listening to System of a Down whilst reading this felt rather appropriate. Can identify with this. Feeling extremely shit atm, as you probably gathered since I text you asking for a text-hug, so not really in critiquing mode... see you a week tomorrow...