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Happy Birthday

H is for happy
A is for amazing
P is for perfect
P is for pretty
Y is for young
B is for beautiful
I is for irresistable
R is for respectable
T is for terrific
H is for honorable
D is for da bomb
A is for angel
Y is for yours always

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Written March 15th, 2005

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  • Moser
    August 7, 2006
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    its good to read a happy poem for once..somthign i dont do much..

  • DevilsWrongHand
    March 22, 2005
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    Thanks josh for reading my work again. glad you enjoyed.
    XOXO
    ~laura


  • josh-13
    March 22, 2005
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    Happy birthday, This is cool. I like the way you did this one. This one is realy cool...................................josh

  • DevilsWrongHand
    March 15, 2005
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    nice write

    Opps i forgot to type that line; thanks for telling me! OMG i feel so silly!
    XOXO
    ~laura


  • sgloveslevi
    March 15, 2005
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    cute

    i would like it more if the other P wasn't missing but it is very cute

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